Elevator Pitch No. 4

I received some awesome feedback which really helped me with my fourth pitch. The only suggestion I received from two people is to shorten my pitch to one minute. I took this into consideration when I was making changes to my pitch, and I realized the pitch kept increasing in length because I kept adding suggestions people were making each time.I did my best to leave the crucial information in the video and take some of the lines that weren't completely necessary out. I didn't receive any feedback that was wrong or silly. I hope you enjoy the changes!