Wednesday, March 16, 2016
Elevator Pitch No. 3
I received some really great feedback which really helped me with my third pitch. Someone asked what made my idea better than tropical smoothie since it offers healthier options as well. I thought this question was definitely important because it was something I needed to mention in my pitch. I took this into consideration when I was making changes to my pitch, and I added a section at the end to answer this question. I didn't receive any feedback that was wrong or silly. I hope you enjoy the changes!
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Hey Rachel! I really like your idea of late night healthy snacks. I feel there is great demand for a healthier options when it comes to midnight. I also think that you did a great job addressing early concerns, as it shows you are very responsive and committed to possible customers. The only thing I would consider is a shorter pitch, as oftentimes people have but a minute to deliver a key idea, especially in the business world. You can check out my blog here: http://agarciaent3003.blogspot.com
ReplyDeleteHey Rachel,
ReplyDeleteYour elevator pitch really got me excited for your product. I wanted to eat a fruit snack when I finished watching the video. I really think you did a great job. If I had to suggest something, I would say you should probably try to shorten the pitch to one minute. That’s about it though. My elevator pitch talks about the clothing store I want to open called Tailored. You can check it out at http://entrepreneurshipblogs.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hey Rachel,
ReplyDeleteThis was by far the best elevator pitch I've seen thus far. You spoke clearly, slowly and conveyed exactly what your idea was. As I'm sitting here with my stomach growling, I wish this was already a thing! If you don't create this, someone else needs to because it would be a major success. http://flgatorblogging.blogspot.com
Hey Rachel!
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job on this assignment. The one thing that made your pitch different from many others was the fact that you showed such enthusiasm introducing your service to us. This got me really interested in your product. It just goes to show that the slightest smile and smallest gesture could go a long way! Way to go! Here's mine: http://cindyblogs4u.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html