I received some awesome feedback which really helped me with my second pitch. Someone suggested to add where the business would be located which I thought was very important to mention. I also was asked where I would be getting my food from which honestly surprised me because it was something that I hadn't put enough thought into. I definitely took both into consideration when I was making changes to my pitch. I didn't receive any feedback that was wrong or silly. I hope you enjoy the changes!
Wednesday, February 17, 2016
Elevator Pitch No. 2
Late Night Light
I received some awesome feedback which really helped me with my second pitch. Someone suggested to add where the business would be located which I thought was very important to mention. I also was asked where I would be getting my food from which honestly surprised me because it was something that I hadn't put enough thought into. I definitely took both into consideration when I was making changes to my pitch. I didn't receive any feedback that was wrong or silly. I hope you enjoy the changes!
I received some awesome feedback which really helped me with my second pitch. Someone suggested to add where the business would be located which I thought was very important to mention. I also was asked where I would be getting my food from which honestly surprised me because it was something that I hadn't put enough thought into. I definitely took both into consideration when I was making changes to my pitch. I didn't receive any feedback that was wrong or silly. I hope you enjoy the changes!
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I really enjoyed your elevator pitch! Late nights studying have my stomach craving something to eat. I really liked the short anecdote of yours that carried throughout the pitch. Tropical Smoothie is already very similar to this service of yours, they even deliever! Except for their location is much farther from campus, what makes your service different from Tropical Smoothie? Check out my blog for cordless chargers in Marston. http://ent3003tb.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
ReplyDeleteYour pitch was awesome! Including those extra things like location and where your food will come from were good things to consider for your idea. Your pitch was really good over all and i really enjoyed watching.
ReplyDeleteRachel,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your opening, I laughed. I often wake up to a box of Pokey Stix. I would definitely be a customer of yours. Your pitch is great and well put together. I often am looking for a healthy meal late at night at Lib West, but Designer Greens is closed and takeout is often expensive. I like this idea a lot! You can check out my elevator pitch on parking here: http://taylertibbits.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html